BeStRaPaEVER
structure is wack as fuck man...seperate ur lines, dont write them i paragraphs...flow fell off due to the wackness in structure...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

daillest1
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals..daillest had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...daillest1 gets my vote...

VOTE - DAILLEST1