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Old 07-29-04, 07:45 AM   #12
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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Damn...re-structure.

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i c these cats is SLEEPIN,
dats y i b CREEPIN,
lay low n only drop writins on da WEEKEND,plz wut these text artist THINKIN
,only flow they got is piss when they LEAKIN
,u textcees jus HATIN
,cuz im WRITIN
niggaz cryin cuz i say nigga when i WRITE
,say i cant rhyme when i RECITE
,niggaz jus mad cuz my rhymes b TIGHT
,instagatin beef on da net tryin 2 get in virtual FIGHT
,cryin like babies cuz drop it LIKE
,fire when i scorch da MIC
C,got shortie shakin they asses LIKE
,sean pauls give me da LIGHT,walk by fish n think of manipulation n say hey shortie how u doin 2NITE


I AIGHT GONNA BOTHER WIT THE REST......^^^^^^^
u gotta make ur lines ryme at the end.not in the middle,
its called structure...fix it...
no hate..advice
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