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Old 07-29-04, 08:06 AM   #15
MaNiPuLaTiOn
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r u peeps dat blind or jus dat lazy 2 read a whole rhyme?...i aint tryin 2 tlk shit but yo re-read my post but read da whole damn thing i kno u can do it it cant take dat much time outta ya busy scedule i rhyme every time wit words in da beginin,middle,n end
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dawg..im not tryna beef,im tryna help.u aint listening,
rhymin words at the begining n middle r multies....
RHYME AT THE END OF UR LINES.....
IM NOT GONNA READ UR WHOLE VERSE COZ ITS THE SAME...
ITS NOT VERY ENTERTAINING TO READ 100 LINES OF WACK STRUCTURE...
FUKIN FIX IT...HOW HARD IS IT TO UNDERSTAND THAT?

UNTILL U DO ITS WACK.SIMPLE AS.
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