OK.SUM FEEDBACK....

that verse looks like its for audio.
wen u write it u gotta hve a beta structure....
keep line length the same,try get the same amount of syllables in each line/bar

I resite des verses lyke dey from out tha bible,
An if u got beef lil nigga u know u dead upon arrival
shot by a rifle,Plus nigga I got dat tek,
I gotta stay equip ta knoc a nigga on his bac
now dats a fact nigga,An now my life is di-gressin,
There's gotta be a way ta let of some of this aggression,
Man I got this crome S-N-Wession ful of passion,
Ready to knoc any nigga off as long as I'm blastin

^^like that....u see it has beta flow..is easier to read.

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