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Old 07-29-04, 09:19 AM   #14
Terumoto
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RIFF: ya rap was nice. came hard, decent flow... bad vocab though... and that structure with a bar then space is noob... not sayin that youre noob, cos clearly u elevated, just ya structure. Ya wordplay was nice man.. props for that.. last two bars were shit though... started strong but fell off by the closer n the bar before it... "shant".. wtf?

macky: aight... well... i was feelin ya flow, i love multis... prolly cos i use em so much, lol.. but yeah.. ya punches werent as good as riffs... like they didnt hit hard.. i KNOW for a fact you could have taken this so easily... always nice to see real mcs round the net... but ya lacked the effort.. with a flow and vocab like yours, you could have come out on top if you tried harder...

V/ riff raff...

now.. heres the deal... ill poll my vote when you vote on this:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136790
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