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Old 07-29-04, 02:32 PM   #7
~Luciano~
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Nice as battle fellaz

Wicked
you had nice punches and nice structure you had some good wordplay but you could have upped it jus a lil bit and you would of been aight you had good complexity and
overall good use of vocab and ya personals were there 8/10

Boston
you had a nice verse hard punches better wordplay, but ya strucuture was a lil off
it made it hard 2 feel the flow it looked kinda sloppy u may wanna fix that but
otha than that it was a perfect drop and it got the job done nice use of vocab

My vote boils down 2 who had the better wordplay and harder punches and that

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