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Old 07-29-04, 03:48 PM   #13
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SPuL:

You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
^^ Good Punch 7/10
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
^^ Good Personal 8/10
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
^^good person wordplay and punch wit a multi 8/10
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
^^LoL Another Good Personal 8/10
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
^^good personal 8/10
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
^^good but you say you got d/rs 7/10
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
^^Good meta 6/10
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
^^bad line 2/10
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
^^decent 5/10
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
^^ok 6/10
*After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick*

I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
^^your best bar 9/10
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
^^kinda basic 5/10
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
^^decent 5/10
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
^^played concept 5/10
Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
^^HOTT 9/10
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
^^Decent Punch But Its Stretched 6/10

Overall : 105/160

Apotheosis:

Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
^^Hot Shyt 8/10
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
^^nice 8/10
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
^^ stretched 5/10
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
^^ Hot 7/10
Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
^^decent 7/10
As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
^^ good personal decent punch 7/10
& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
^^ OK 5/10
Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
^^good punch 7/10

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
^^ good personal 8/10
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
^^ decent 7/10
Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
^^ Nice 7/10
Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
^^good personal 6/10
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
^^ not feelin it 3/10
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
^^not feelin this either 3/10
That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
^^decent 5/10
This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
^^good personal 7/10

overall : 100/160

Polifick:

Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
^^good multies decent punches 7/10
Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
^^good meta decent punch 6/10
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
^^good meta's personal and punch 8/10
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
^^lol another good meta nice punch 7/10
Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
^^weak And forced 4/10
Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
^^bad use of multies destroyed this bar 3/10
Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...
^^lines are too long 4/10

Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
^^DAMM Pure Fire 10/10
If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
^^lol decent punch and metas 7/10
Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
^^1st line played 2nd line hott meta decent punch 7/10
Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
^^stop using multies you havent mastered the use of em yetr 5/10
Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
^^good personal but damn stop with the multies 5/10
Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
^^that was good ude of multies hott bar 9/10
Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
^^ehh decent 7/10
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...

^^good closer hot personal 10/10

overall : 100/150


v/polifick cause he got 100/150 and that is 10 better then apo and 5 better then spul