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Old 07-29-04, 04:18 PM   #15
~Luciano~
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aight this was a good close battle but it came down 2 the more complex verse
and the harder punches

Disaster you had a good verse you had good wordplay and ya punches could of hit
alot harder but you had a good flow alltogether ya structure was a lil fucked up
but you can fix that you had nice vocab and it was a good drop

Plu you had a nice drop to good wordplay good complexity and ya punches
hit harder than ya comp's and overall you had better structure and better
wordplay which made ya flow run alot more smoother and made it look alot
better and it was easier to read and ya had better vocab overall you had
the better drop

my vote~~~~~~~~~~pLUtonium~~~~~~~~~~
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