lol...
i aint got nothing against eithe rone of these emcees.. but my vote is easily for datruth...
...God... has 1 or 2 decent line sin there... but datruth was hittin him in almost everybar.. there was maybe one where he self glorified, but thats its...
ima break down these verses so ya'll wont be tempted to think im ryding..
...God...
Lol..The truth hurts when you already got banned 2 times....*
shyt this fag doent learn he got
cought bitten eminem Rhymes
^Not that hard of a personal..when you use a link, the link gotta be a rhyme first.. link is just to aid and explain.. you cant just make the link your rhyme.. gotta work it perfectly for it to hit ahrd or atleast decent...this was an okkkk bar..
this dudes rhymes about as vicious as a dog without a bark...
ur chances of winnin are like a blind man seein in dark...
^iv seen both of those lines... played
im guaranteein sparks, my verse harder than ron jeremy on viagra...
this faggot always BLOW-ME (below me) the way he's fallin down niagra...
first line is decent...second lines wordplay is gay...what does niagra have to do with a battle lol..
im stallin so i can grab ya, put ya temples back in ya brain...
stick his tonsils in his stomach, his rhymes so whack he's havin chest pains...
^no
im the best mane, they say im a one man wreckin machine...
they should call me da lyrical surgeon the way i tear apart ya spleen...
^no punch
my heart is mean, i flame this dude like my face was the sun...
only 9 milli u got is ur dick, so dont even talk about guns...
^played...
thoughts:this entire verse was played.. iv seen every last line in there somewhere else.. now when i say played, i mean he didnt flip it original.. you gotta flip played concepts and make them yours.. flow was good.. structure was good.. but it kinda defeats the purpose when the punches are original.
datruth
After I slay him, he'll turn around and be my fuckin Groupie/
This dude is 10-0, but got all of his wins battling Newbies/
^lol.. i checked his record, and they are lol..you should have put a link to make it easier on the reader you understand that..
You're too weak, you're styles' dirty like a Bum in a Small Park/
Shit, you have no bite, your like stripped wood, Nothin but All Bark/
^nice meta
I can freestyle a fuckin album and Make It A CLassic/
Far as parties, you couldn't rock a house if you "Made It From Granet"/
^lol that was sick
In battles I usually Project Sound, But I'll just eat you with the Text Style/
KnockOut's, won't be a next round, flame, I stay with heat like Reptiles/
^eh.. didnt liek this .. it sounded good and there was a meta there, but it was a glorification meta. bleh on those
I take care of you "cats" one by one, like vertranarians/
This dude knows it, so he avoids the "beef", like vegitarians/
^lil bit played.. but it was flipped in a diff way that i heard it.. Decent bar
Coz you cofuse peeps on what the hell you be Yappin ABout/
You just need to "SHUT YOUR TRAP" like you were Catchin A Mouse/
^Good meta
thoughts:fix your structure.. i hate those // - /'s things.. flow was good.. this was a pretty good verse.. except for that one bar or two...
Vote: Datruth
^all dick ryder up ther5e afraid to vote Originally...
no beef to god tho, cause he cool people.. just didnt bring it this battle