i was a liitle confused with that flow.. the whole paragraph thing is gay and you don't have enough line that i can tell neway

here mine:

trying to battle me i can't believe this fuckin cat is serious//
he don't no what he doing, he gotta be fucking delerious//
even if you were panties you still won't get in my girls pants//
a bullet will have you leaning back like the roc away dance//
you the type of dude to stock a raper to get some dick//
i only gotta spit six lines so we get this shit over wit quick//
my words cause more trouble than denis the menis//
the only way you gonna serve me is if we play tennis//
but dat'll never happen cause that ain't my game//
i'll say it "raps fucked up" but your the one to blame//
wit me around your ass is gonna get locked up like akon//
the flow will make you tipsy in the bitch like i was J-kawn//
you better not fuck wit me cause i'm the rap don//
and the only way you gonna get me to leave is if you call 9 won won//
when we done the only thing you'll be riding in is a herse//
this shit was over before you even spit your verse//

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