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Old 07-29-04, 11:15 PM   #9
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Complex: I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Verse...It Was Kinda Basic...HaHa...Name Is Complex Rhymes Is Basic Blah! You Get It...Anyways...I Think You Could Have Done Better...You Had Some Decent Punches But None Really Hit That Hard...You Came Pretty Weak...The Structure Was Really Good Though...You Could Have Used Personals Maybe It Would Have Been Better....No W/P No Multies...Pretty Much A Basic Verse

Overall : 5/10

Mr W Rite:

You Had Some Pretty Good Personals...The One About His Sig...And The Ones ABout His Name Were Good...Your Punches Were Decent Also...Better Than Complex's Punches But Not Hott Just Better Than His....Good Vocab...Good Structure...Decent Verse

Overall : 7/10

Vote: Mr W Rite

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