bro ya gotta get some format structure n work on ya drops in all it was'nt a very good verse,did'nt like your simple ryme scheme,i think you need ta take a look at da tutorials"honestly"a.k.a:not your best i bet but it was good n deff enough ta take da win..no hate jus work on ya drops bro.....
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