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This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
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oK.. THE FIRST BAR IS OK, NO REAL PUNCH THO
2ND, NO REAL PUNCH, JUST INSULTS
3RD, COO RHYMES, JUST NO PUNCH..
4TH.. NO REAL PUNCH, AND IT DIDN'T RHYME
5TH BAR.. NICE CLOSER, THE BEST PART OF YOUR VERSE..
7/10
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