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Old 07-30-04, 01:21 AM   #23
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Voted For: KroNuz

Kronuz--I like ya flow on this one. good hitting punches, but a sorry closer. don't forget where you're able to post these verses for other heads to vote on em. you sposed to be battlin ya opponent not the board, anyhow I think you had the edge.

J-Trooper, stretched lines...the first line threw me off things. I laughed at the closer.....but yeah. I think you could shorten the lines a bit....and go for some multis in a verse.
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