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Old 07-30-04, 01:54 AM   #12
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Voted For: BostonLyricist

you punches connected flow was ok but ya content n originality in ya verse was obvious in this battle,some stretched lines thast i dint like but your ryme scheme made up 4 it..nice drop the other guy had 4 more lines n still dint have da same overall effect....i was'nt feelin his entire verse especially the opener...not good considering thats the first thing voters read...no hate jus my opinion ya'll
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i dunno if i can put this here??
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106
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