Darc Mind: Work on the flow man. It was semi-good, but still, it sounded like you were rushing in a lot of places. Just feel the beat. Lyrics were eh. Nothing special, really. The delivery was so-so too.

Black Dragon: Too loud. Like Darc Mind you spit at some points way too fast, vocabulary was weak, and the Eminem beat...just ain't working for me. Flow was a tad below Darc Minds. Some rhymes were just weak, (Britney Spears line). You sound like a rapper I knew that sucked, but was hella funny.

I'm giving this one to Darc Mind.

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