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Voted For: Word processor
You had better punches, structure, flow...everything really, just a tip Word, dont use the //'s very noobish my man
Graceful, stretched out lines which fucked wit da flow, need to come harder with punches, focus on the battle, dont ramble off about crap...try to spell words right "tooken"? straight up stupid playa
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