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Old 07-30-04, 03:10 AM   #15
Detrimental
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ok...good battle but Hotshh! took it

Hotshh!-you had a good flow...your punches hit harder than his...more creative and i liked how it all was rhymed with metaphor....nice....ok structure

Dil-That structure was ok....not that good...no offense...i dunno...your punches were weak....they like nipped him...your punches just was kinda bad...Hotshh! would've took it with just half of his verse
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