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Old 07-30-04, 08:57 AM   #29
Terumoto
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well

2: ya verse was lame, weak punches, off flow n bad structure.

gangstar: some decent wordplay, wasnt really feelin ya punches... word to ya ///'s bein newbish, get riddovem... get more personal... get more complex flow-wise... but hey least ya words rhymed... one better than the other guys

v/ gangstar
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