Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!
I liked yo start off riff, and you had good stucture also.. the first bar o phatinum, was alright but i didn't realy get it.. I think that riff came a lil bit harder with the personals and punches so i vote for him.. his structure was also better.. V/Riff Raff
return favor with a vote in my thread yo..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136085