Voted For: D-Tain

$ Wordman $
structure isnt very good...u started out with shorter lines, but ended with stretched ones...flow fell off quite a bit...u had a few multis...u attempted wordplay, but most of it was just wack...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

D-Train
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Overall
D-Train had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...D-Train gets my vote...

VOTE - D-TRAIN

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