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~Cursed With Illness~
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IP:
Justify - Not really a good verse......You had maybe one good punch, "You'll be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl".......You had decent structure but tha rest of your verse was lacking good lyrics.....tha swiss cheese line is played.......And personals are good but no when they're fake.....how do u know he is white???......Aight drop...4/10
Katastrofe - Ya closing bar didn't really rhyme....but ya overall lyrics was better than Justify's and you had more punches that hit......The bar wit niagra and viagra wasn't necessarily a good punch but the two lines fit together perfectly some decent wordplay.......Both of you need to elevate and consider multi's and vocabulary next time.....Aight drop......5/10
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