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Old 07-30-04, 04:47 PM   #1
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Cypher King. True Story.
 
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The whole beginning had lines that seemed recycled from other niggas.
For example:
oh, I'm back on the grind, slap a cat ewit the back of his nine,
cause he was talkin like he was out of his mind,

Rakim said damn near the exact same thing four years ago.
But the actual diss, that was pretty tight. Dope metas, nice flow/structure, wordplay was lovely. Keep it up.
Overall, nice drop. It could be better, but there were a few recycled lines in there.
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