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Old 07-30-04, 04:55 PM   #10
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Voted For: graceful flow

I wasn't impressed by either but this verse had better puches personal but it was sloppy ur structure I don't like and the way u overexaggerate ur punches like 'SICK' and 'ELEVATOR'
they were played.
return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043
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