sl:you had good vocab n decent structure your flow was alot easier ta read n overall i think ya had the better verseyour punches were aight,dint notice any good personals..
young:you had really bad text structure,some good ideas but you ruined your verse the way you worded your lines n laid it out....im gonna havta give this 1 ta sl cause of his punches n structure ....
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