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Voted For: Big Bad Wolf
Big Bad Wolf
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some multis...wordplay was alright...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...
phatinum
structure isnt very good...u started out with stretched lines, went to short lines, then back to stretched lines...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..
Overall
neither had good personals...Big Bad Wolf had the better structure..the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Big Bad Wolf gets my vote...
VOTE - BIG BAD WOLF
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