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Old 07-30-04, 06:48 PM   #27
Mr W.Rite
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Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
not bad, but nothing special either..
as far as i am concerned you have already beat
Spul...unless you go on a completely wack vengence


Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
no...doesnt really make sense, read it again..
didnt like this at all


Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
ok... this was a little better, still nothing special

Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
decent personal, better punch here

Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
nope, too elementary..didnt like..it was played too

As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
nope...to simple..need a more complicated rhyme scheme
too elememtary....my nephew can rhyme these words..

& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
no..seemed forced..didnt like this either
you are going downhill


Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
not that bad...decent concept...it wasnt dope
but it was better than most of your other lines


moving on

Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
this was the best punch of the match so far...thankyou
for throwin a punch that actually landed..


Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
didnt like the BOOM in the setup..took away from your
verse..the punch wasnt bad though...


Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
i really didnt get this one, might be some kinda personal
so i wont comment on this one


Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
no..forcin your persoanls...and by the way..links in your verse
is played as hell..they are not necessary, if you need a link
to use a personal, don t use them..i never click links
they take too much time...i wanna read the dam battle and be done
with it


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
this was aight i guess, nothing special..i did get the punche though
i still didnt think it was that dope


I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
no...didnt like the concept, never heard of flash bangin either
loss me there bro


That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
not a punch here, you are just statin the obvious
not really dissin him to me iunno. maybe i missed it again


This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
i saw this coming, the only thing worse than a played punch
is a predictable one...not a good closer


i have to say after reading your verse, you did have a few sparks
followed by some horrible lines...
it was about ten times better than Spul's verse because u actually
connected on a few of your punches..
nothing great though..keep droppin verses...dude, you'll get there

one more to go ..
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