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Old 07-30-04, 08:13 PM   #17
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Voted For: $ Wordman $


So you call the word out, ta battle D-Tain
Fist Off, yah gonna Lose yah credit here like ja's Chain
7/10
Bearing Rein on yah soul, You lack the Hook, like a broken candy cane
Im Hot like Butane, you Colder then Mccain
6/10
Devouring yah pride out of yah body, as if i Ripped yah Jugalar Vein!
As you pore over this Text, You begin To Feel Useless like a Cafs's Brain,
7/10
Your Self As a Boy, is Eroding Like Stuck in Acid Rain..
you'd have a better chance of Making it Big, doing a Du-o with Shania Twain...
8/10


like an exit wound, my verse will leave yours ripped open....
like a baby swallowin' a food token, your left chokin'...
7/10
your punches wudnt hurt me, if they had on brass knuckles...
the lid to your can of dopeness, is tighter than a belt buckle...
6/10
my shit is fresh, $ man word $ spits shit you prolly already heard...
check his battle wit Riff Raff, he Says RB not RV like he's bit the verse...
7/10
your structure is weak, like a bridge in an earth quake, or twister...
when i take the win, it'll be stuck on your record like a blister...
7/10
comparing you to a bullet, you come out, and you gone fast....
and when we find u hours later, your still in a mans ass....
5/10

Came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay

My vote~~~~~Word~~~~~~~~~
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