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Old 07-30-04, 09:39 PM   #28
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valor-your verse was really shit this time man......i dont care how weak your opponent is you should still come hard no matter what......flow okay your sttrcuture was really fucked up and your personals wasnt really that good so they was wakc

big=flow was okay could use some work your verse really sucked overall and eveyrthing punches was played anbd wack and they didnt hit at all so you really need to elevate

opener: valor
closer: valor
meta's: valor
puches: valor
rhymes: both


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