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Old 07-30-04, 11:16 PM   #17
~Luciano~
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I make bars best believe dat i'm hungry./
And you dont wanna get wit this cause my bars are ugly./
6/10
You say you got money but pull out lent though./
You aint an idal lookin like J-leno./
6/10
If you enter this battle you wont be able to attack./
your like a gun and your friends help you by pullin you back./
6/10
I murder dis kid like enemys on my property./
And have backrupped like having no money playing monopoly/
5/10
Why is it just me that have sins dats bad./
the only reason they like you is cause you loud like sin-bad./
6/10
This is just alittle taste like drinkin apple sider./
Dis must be your first time, you ameature writer
5/10


I will twist your arms til your bones crack
spit in yo face make you know your rhymes wack
6/10
take a knife down, give you a back stab
turn you round, let you know it was my bad
6/10
Peel off your skin in thin stripes
fill up your body in flammable gas pipes
6/10
clog it up with a carton of ass wipes
light up the whole thin with a match strike
6/10
You're rhymes are sticky like mac'n'cheese
your flow contagious like cholera desease
8/10
better be learnin vocab from your a.b.c's
try to make better calligraphy than the japanese!
8/10

this battle came down 2 who had the harder punch and better wordplay


my vote~~~~~Hustler~~~~~~~~
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