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Old 07-30-04, 11:17 PM   #10
Percept Shun
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^WTF?????!!!?!?!?!

S.D.Original - I thought you came pretty damn decent in this. I liked your metaphors like the closer and the 'gifted' line. Your punches, most of them hit and hit a lot harder than String. Another plus is the fact you got multies there.

String - I wasn't feeling none of your shit. You had personals but they weren't that good... and punches but they were weak. It felt like a newbie verse(well it was). Your flow was all over the place and some of your lines were stretched as fuck while most were too short.

V/S.D.Original - a lot stronger punches and a lot more often.
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