Originally Posted by Percept Shun

Who invited him here? If theres no herbs in, then who's he?
Guess Karl wanted to be honest when he first named the tourney.
Woo, I love hearing my name. Lol. This was a slick opener; not wack, not a hard punch ... but it works.
Cause his bars are 'fucking soft', like sex without erections.
Thats why this battle's one sided like the next presidential election.
Both lines were odd:
1. You can't have 'intercourse' without an erection. Obviously. I suppose there's numerous sexual things that could be done without it, but let's not get into that right now....
2. I think the presidential election could be closer then you've stated. Again, that's another matter.
All and all, I'm going to overlook this.
Your verses straight up ass, like a fat women wearing tight thongs.
Even putting Vodka in party drinks, won't help you make your punch strong.
Punch-Punch ... The concept is relativly played out, but in this case... it was interesting. Depending on what L.I comes with, this could prove to be a decent bar.
I could water this herb and watch his skill not even grow.
because L.I. couldn't coin new lines, placing money in pay phones.
The herb thing is known to be massivly played. See? The word played pretty much sums it up. These lines would be so much doper back in the day though. Sorry man.
You and this career don't match, like nuns being nudists.
....and about as important to rap, as the pope is to budhists.
Err... I'm not going to say much about this. You may have heard this before, but; Your Punches don't hit hard enough. Most of them show originality, but it's a battle, not an Open Mic. Creativity is good, but it needs to be tied in with punches. How do I know? I've got the same problem. Think about that next time you're writing your verse.
He's destined to lose this, like cults I'll be choosing his faith, but still.
.....he named himself L.I. just cause he's the exact opposite of I.L. (iLL)
Technically, it only spells IL.. LMAO. Just kidding around. I'll give you props for creativity- I know you're thinking. But this was not a hard punch.

Originally Posted by L.I

Set him a near impossible goal of greatness like this is dr. phil...
His name already paints the picture.. how he's still pursuing skill...
I believe Percept Shun, refers to perceive rather then pursue. Although, feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.
Obvious hes an Old RB reject trying to hit it big like that herb Rascal...
But he'll get the same thing.. a nice record but merked by vets wit no hassle...
You shouldn't have mentioned you key'd this, cause it appears more obvious in lines like this. Come on L.I, i'm hoping the following get's better
Ill knife his neck.. as i slice and dice his body, like its a horror movie...
And have him shakin in trama .. like he was Cash Money booty...
Lol, better. Keep it up.
Whats the point of him living.. i mean i wouldnt care if this kid died...
Since after i met him.. i understood why people commit suicide...
You're falling off again.
This kid aint got the nuts.. seriously nothing is matured or grown...
And how could he write deep.. when his voice aint at the tone... (his age...)
Lol, okay... finishing stronger...
Get yah ass out of here.. you aint wanted, and thats the truth...
You just got beat more then dicks of kids of your youth...
Worded very awkwordly, and it didn't come off very nice.

Overall, I didn't break down your lines like I did for some of the other battlers. I believe you're a vet here, and you should know what's expected. I strongly felt you half-assed the hell out of this, and you're going to take the loss for it. All your other dick riders can come and vote for you, but I'm not going to.

Probably didn't matter much to you anyway.