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Old 07-31-04, 12:32 AM   #10
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Voted For: dysphoria

this verse was better all around n was obviously tried at,good even if ya did have some stretched lines i dint mind considering the content n complexity of them...some original punches n nice wordplay..good job..1st verse dint like it......basic all around srry dawg but ya need ta elevate...
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