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Old 07-31-04, 01:21 AM   #16
~Luciano~
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fuck your bullshit rap, filled wit fakeness,embroiled attacks/
metaphorical slaps, battle hi-jacks and fake comebacks/
6/10
youll lose in this battle of wits ill make dat a promise/
big talk but no balls - comin weak like you on anabolics/
5/10
I Shoot-Pegs for Breakfest leaving ya with Two-Eggs,
I Strapped on Shin Pads Knowing ur only good for boot-legs/
6/10
You rhymin hot? Damn, thats what I call a straight myth/
cuz ur brain iz da "size of a pickle"since ill throw a fit u got 2 "dill" wit/
7/10

i only broke down the winning drop
best u had a nice drop but u need better wordplay and harder punches and fix
ya structure

my vote~~~~Daillest1~~~~
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