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Old 07-31-04, 01:58 AM   #8
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This was feedback posted for A.M.O.K

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A.M.O.K

A.M.O.K runs pass trash talking raps, moron flee fast
Cause I'll embrassess & drop 'J.T' like Cameron Diaz,
->>I really liked this line

You've uploaded your Fams portrait onto you sig, kid
& it's so obvious your the bitch wearing the white singlet,
->>so-so

DO NOT ACT SMART NITWIT!!Follow what I say carefully
I'd belittle his words.... but he does it by himself perfectly,
->>been done before

Personals?You see, I'm full of them like matchmaker.com
Unlike him... like a J_Trooper bout in EFL... you'll see none,
->>been done before

'Born n the streets' huh?Only water squirts out of ya glocks
W/ blanks your fire... it's clear you were raised on Writers Block,
->>pretty cool closer

It was close but I say you edged it out...yours made more sense and was more enjoyable to me
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