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Old 07-31-04, 03:32 AM   #8
Poppa Kap
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Who invited him here? If theres no herbs in, then who's he?
Guess Karl wanted to be honest when he first named the tourney.
^not bad opener...not VERY strong

Cause his bars are 'fucking soft', like sex without erections.
Thats why this battle's one sided like the next presidential election.
top line played & I wasnt really feeling the 2nd part but it was decent.

Your verses straight up ass, like a fat women wearing tight thongs.
Even putting Vodka in party drinks, won't help you make your punch strong.
1st was funny & 2nd like Karl said is played but it was decent.

I could water this herb and watch his skill not even grow.
because L.I. couldn't coin new lines, placing money in pay phones.
liked this alot.

You and this career don't match, like nuns being nudists.
....and about as important to rap, as the pope is to budhists.
nah 2 basic.

He's destined to lose this, like cults I'll be choosing his faith, but still.
.....he named himself L.I. just cause he's the exact opposite of I.L.
I liked that, good & direct.

overall not a bad verse.

Set him a near impossible goal of greatness like this is dr. phil...
His name already paints the picture.. how he's still pursuing skill...
word at what Karl said. This doesnt make sense. Perception is how you see things.

Obvious hes an Old RB reject trying to hit it big like that herb Rascal...
But he'll get the same thing.. a nice record but merked by vets wit no hassle...
haha at Rascal gettin dissed & not even in this. erm 2nd line was basic.

Ill knife his neck.. as i slice and dice his body, like its a horror movie...
And have him shakin in trama .. like he was Cash Money booty...
this made me laugh but i dont like "attack" lines coz ur not makin a punch.

Whats the point of him living.. i mean i wouldnt care if this kid died...
Since after i met him.. i understood why people commit suicide...
wack 4 u

This kid aint got the nuts.. seriously nothing is matured or grown...
And how could he write deep.. when his voice aint at the tone... (his age...)
played but nice flip.

Get yah ass out of here.. you aint wanted, and thats the truth...
You just got beat more then dicks of kids of your youth...
very played.

Vote Percept Shun for a more solid verse