String9487
structure is way too simple man...flow was on target...u had a few multis...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

schema
dont space out ur bars...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...decent personals...

Overall
String9487 had more multis...both had a stable flow...schema had the better structure...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...schema gets my vote...

VOTE - SCHEMA