I'm jus dropping feedback but i think both verses need work on them...Caliph u need to extend ur vocab um & him u need to perhaps develop on ur punches personals metas multies blah blah all in all it wasnt good to read.

Neither was ills the structure needs serious attention the /// is newbish so get rid...you need just as much work unfortunately which is why im not voting...was not impressed

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