Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!

Good battle y'all

Platinum.....you had some weak punches but a lot of your verse was just filler. and your structure was bad man...u have to end your lines somewhere, flow was off do to your bad structure, you didn't have any personals art all, you need to elevate but you got potential man u just gotta learn how to do things

Riff....ok I can see that you didn't try in this one but you still took it in my opinion, you had personals they weren't strong but they were funny, nice way to play off his age and inexperience made this a easy win for you, punches were decent, they were hard enuff u didn't need to go all out in this one. flow was solid, and structure was tight, good battle

Aye yo ccould y'all holla back on my battle wit some honest explained votes, appreciate dat
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1451408

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