Voted For: !RIFF RAFF!
I liked them both Riff wins cuz he had more punches that were harder hittin. But I have to say Phat has improved immensely keep up the good work there wasn't that much between you. Phat some of your punches were played try to avoid that. Creativity. up your game like your doin. return the fav. Cali wins more punches that were harder hitting and a better structured verse I don't no how it is possible to win wit this little this is a one off Cali I kno you were jus 'doin enuff to win' but this takes da biscuit betta to be certain than cocksure you do kno dat ain't even 6 bars (but jus between me and you) return da fav.
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Lil bing learn to structure your verse learn from Phatinum he used to write like you wit da same type of content but improved after takin a piece of advice from me who learnt from a piece of advice from others your structure looked raped there was one personal I saw and get some punches in fact, go to the tutorial sect. I dare not re-read your verse. like I said return da fav.
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