Voted For: daillest1
This is the only verse where I see punches thos battle lacked punches but I have to sa this was 'da illest' out of the two Brother you're lackin in the attack this is a battle yea your rhymin but u ain't punchin it's different from an audio battle even then ur verse still was weak ur structure looked newbish so I suggest the pro look bting it together. return da fav.
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