i thought it was an alright battle but ie your punches werent hitting n were pretty straight forward not alot of complexity,tried multi's but your structure was fucked ta follow,jus ya syllable count was off n i don't think some of ya lines rymed,on the other hand i liked ya content n vocab but ya jus dint play off da punches well enough...i was'nt feeling ya closer either...srry dawg...no hate

mt ya verse could use a lil work but w/e ya ryme scheme was there along with personal/structure n flow...you basically took this in all cats.....nice verse
vote/mistah tate
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