Voted For: DRAG~ON
nice verse fo a noob..no bad wordplay no real personals but ya punches were much better than phat's ,you had decent structure but i think ya should try n even out your lines ta get flow on lock..good verse 4 havin under 50 posts though dawg..keep it up...phat you gotta elevate alot son,that verse was'nt very good...keep tryin...no hate ya'll pc
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