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Old 07-31-04, 05:49 PM   #8
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Voted For: Triple_N

Triple N.......your verse was okay i have seen you come better then this.....your rhyme scheem was good not the best but good.......fl0ow was okay could have worked it a lil bit more but still good.....structure was good and i enjoyed your punches.........keep it up

Calamity.......didnt enjoy your structure at all.......with all the . . . . . . . . . . .'s and shit really fucked up the flow and everything......i know that it is to show a punch but people that vote in elevated know what punches are and understand all the shit......althouh you had personals they wasnt really that good and your strucyture and flow really fucked this up for you

v/Triple for a better verse