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Old 07-31-04, 06:35 PM   #14
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aight i dint like either openers bp you fed off his verse 4 ya opener...ya structure was better punches were ok flow was good,some stretched lines that i can't really consider multi's but it was an alright verse...good drop...toon^^i agree there was some stuff in ya verse that was lame n dint really have any meaning...ya need ta fixya structure n get more complex...n better vocab....no hate but this was an obvious vote..
vote/black pantha