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Old 07-31-04, 08:28 PM   #13
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Voted For: A.K.A.

AKA, told you once before, dont use the //'s in your drop, okay punches, no multis...a couple of ok personals...structure a little stretched at time, but good flow

Wicked, Whats with all the big words...just seemed like you were trying to show off with the vocab way to much or you were using a rhyming dictionary...i dont like looking at verses where i have to flip through a dictionary almost every line..decent punches tho...stretched out lines that messed with the flow
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