Voted For: DV8
Phat once again your structure has let you down try and stay on topic it helps. DV8 you win for statin names from D12 you missed out Em afterall it is his band. Seriously you win because you used personals that connected. Your structure wasn't too bad but you don't need to seperate every 2 lines pull your verse together to make it look better and get some punches
return da fav
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