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Old 07-31-04, 09:56 PM   #11
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Voted For: EmerginMc07

ight,

Props to both, you both Came with your own "Style, Creativitity, and Individuality..'

There was nothin you two really shared but both excelled in your own ways..

I figured however, "Phatinum" you where attempting to push somethin you already can do, which is spit..

Too many hard lines, forced a small vocab which cost you the match...

Emergin, you kept one word to rhyme wit consistent and nottin wrong wit that but it didnt bring nottin new but you "Did Not" over do it, props..

Vocab was a bit better, as the flo, n the lines i was feelin mos':

sum dude shows his dick u redy to massage it,
u like a fag bank evry1's made a deposit,
dawg ill fuck u up evn worse den imaginable,
il do u like my man hannibal,
u tryin yo hardest but ppl jus laff at ya,
im sukin yo skills outa ya like dracula,

Punches there for win, keep doin "Both" your things tho,

Emergin n Phatinum Return the Favor in one of the battles below..:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138264
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138680
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138700
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