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Old 07-31-04, 10:25 PM   #2
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From: chi-town
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not the best verse i seen from either of you but hey..

708- short verse but good quality (punches, things that matter) good job..

*The~Star*- nice verse also a lil' longer and nice use of multis...

closer-Star:
I’m stabbing ya rhymes up more than OJ Simpson stabbed his wife
That’s a infinite amount of times, cold-hearted, you longer have life

opener-708:
dis gon' be more one sided than the november election
i'm beatin dis bitch faster than a horny niggas lonley erection
^lmao, nice battle u two but in my opinion length isn't a factor it's the quality.. and neither one of y'all dropped a better structure so my vote..

708
good job Star mami u doin' ya thang, keep it up..
~wun~
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