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Old 07-31-04, 10:41 PM   #18
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dawg weak ending and weak personals and punches plus your flow was stretched to far your struture was horrible
ghost good struture and vocab your ending was stronger as was your beggining not your best verse but still a strong couple bars iliked the you speeding to ya death bar and the reverse phsycology bar those was slick you need to use more personals but you aint need um to win this
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